Author's Note for Public Analysis

This is my first draft of my public analysis of Central Market. As of now, I know this draft is certainly ROUGH. Each paragraph needs significant work, but I need help on the flow and organization of my work. I really have 2 main arguments, but I am not sure if that is apparent. I have a lot more examples to add in, but I just wanted to get the main outline out and get that out of the way for now. What I am asking everyone who reads this analysis is PLEASE HELP ME WITH PUNCTUATION. This has forever been my Achilles' heal and I need help, BAD! Please add any comments, but of course be kind. ;)